The story was quite different from what I expected from a book titled 'The Mountains Rise'. I expected some sort of heroic tale of epic proportions, involving plenty of magic, damsels in distress and a darkmage. I got something even better, but quite different.
The main character gradually develops with the progress of the plot. At the beginning of the book, we see a fifteen year old boy with serious psychological problems regarding the opposite sex. This was a teenager with serious hormonal problems, sticking his 'thing' into any 'soft hole' he could find. He also had the advantage of being able to magically coax any woman into being horny. To cap it off, he was in love with another girl. Serious psychological problems imo.
After his capture and enslavement, he actually begins to develop some sense and maturity....
The book, rather than being plot based, is character based. Its follows the development of a character from being a juvenile pscho to being mature. Its then mixes in a fine magical storyline featuring what makes us human.
Its a fine tale, well told. The writer is truly a fine storyteller. I eagerly await Book 2.