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The Forever King (The Scalussen Chronicles #1) by Ben Galley - Book Review
25, Apr

The Forever King is a classic epic fantasy chock full of monsters, magic, and big, bad ass battles.

The Iron Crown (Dragon Spirits #1) by L.L. MacRae - SPFBO 7 Finalist Book Review
23, Apr

SPFBO7 Finalist Review

When Fenn awakens with no memory of anything beyond his name, it sets him on a path of discovery. With the aid of the allies he makes along the way, Fenn begins to learn, not only some fragments of his past, but of the role he may have to play in his world’s future. 

Norylska Groans by Michael R. Fletcher & Clayton W. Snyder - SPFBO 7 Finalist Book Review
27, Apr

Norylska is a city struggling under a number of oppressions. There is the near-permanent winter, the poverty and totalitarian government left in place after a recent war, and the depredations of the various criminal gangs determined to carve Norylska up between them, with Katyushka Leonova and Genndy Antonov caught in the middle. 

Reign and Ruin (Mages of the Wheel #1) by J.D. Evans - SPFBO 7 Finalist Book Review
29, Mar

For my final SPFBO 7 finalist review, here is Reign and Ruin by J.D. Evans

Beginnings and endings. That is why there must be balance. To relieve the terrible with the beautiful, to make the beautiful more precious, for the threat of its absence. 

Shadows of Ivory (The Godforged Chronicles #1) by T.L. Greylock, Bryce O'Connor - Book Review
22, Mar

Shadows of Ivory is an entertaining adventure story full of interesting characters and memorable scenes. When a young noble woman steals an ancient artifact from a dastardly aristocrat she stumbles onto a secret buried in the pages of history. What follows is a globe spanning hunt for a set of powerful relics shrouded in mystery. Over the course of her pursuit, Eska de Caraval, uncovers competing factions hellbent on recovering these magical MacGuffins for nefarious purposes.

We Men of Ash and Shadow (The Vanguard Chronicles #1) by H.L. Tinsley - SPFBO 7 Finalist Book Review
14, Mar

SPFBO7 Finalist Review

Tensions are running high throughout the city of D’Orsee. One of its more prominent citizens has vanished, possibly murdered; and everyone, from the well-to-do to the meanest criminal gangs, is wondering how to turn it to their advantage. 

Legacy of the Brightwash (Tainted Dominion #1) by Krystle Matar - SPFBO7 Review
13, Mar

*SPFBO7 Finalist Review*

 

Legacy of the Brightwash is a romance gaslamp fantasy with some dark undertones. It caught me by surprise, to be honest. The blending of genres is very well done, and the worldbuilding is superb. The story takes place in one city, yet the world doesn't feel small. The author excels at descriptive writing, and you really feel like you're there with the characters, experiencing everything this world has to offer them. 

The story starts following Tashue, who works for the Authority, sort of like the police force in this world. His job is to oversee several Talented individuals, people whose magic power the city, from the steamboats to the lights. The Talented (or tainted, as they are sometimes called in a derogatory manner) are forced to register, and their whereabouts are tracked. They must follow a strict code of conduct. If they don't register, or step outside the very limited lines drawn for them, they can be sent away to the Rift - a jail-like facility that many never return from. From the outset, the story was intriguing. Tashue finds a child whose legs and arms are cut off, with a strange tattoo on the back of her neck. She is dead, having been washed up on the riverbank. No one knows who she is or how she got there. It should have been none of his business, but the child's death sticks with Tashue, compelling him to find out what happened to her. This sets him on a new trajectory for his life, and he finds himself questioning everything he has ever known. 

As far as characters go, I didn't really like Tashue all that much. He is part of a system that oppresses others, and while he doesn't feel all that right doing some of the things he does, I was quite irritated initially by his "Well, this stuff we do is wrong but I can't do anything about it, can I?" type of attitude. Much like a reluctant slave owner, he exists in the system and doesn't question his privilege until that very system throws his son in the Rift. As his character develops, he becomes more and more disillusioned by what he represents. He grew on me, eventually, but I didn't end up actually liking him when all is said and done. 

The story also follows that of Stella and her daughter Ceridwen. Stella is introduced as Tashue's love interest, and their pining for each other and the sexual tension between them can be cut with a knife. However, it becomes apparent that Stella is not who she initially seems to be - a whisperer who helps people die peacefully - and she and her daughter are likable and engaging. A good portion of the book is spent on Stella and Tashue's burgeoning love affair, and at one point you're basically begging them to have sex finally, and be done with it. Generally speaking, I wasn't put off by their romance. It was a bit overdone as far as just how much they thought of each other, but I'm sure romance fans will gobble this up. 

The writing is, simply put, beautiful. The author is very talented in crafting a scene, making you feel like you are really there, while keeping the characters the focal point. However, this book did drag a bit. There were several throwaway scenes that didn't do much to progress the plot, and there was a lot of rehashing of information, such as characters telling other characters what had just happened, that the reader already knows about. There are a few inciting incidents, so there isn't a typical five act structure. I'm more of a traditionalist when it comes to story structure, however, I'm all about writing the story the way it needs to be written, as opposed to forcing the story into a structure that doesn't fit it. So while I was a bit put off by the - how shall I put this - haphazard way the plot fits together, I can also see why the author made some of the choices that she did. 

My main contention with this story, besides the unnecessary scenes, is a lack of cohesion in the plot. I think this is due to what I mentioned above, but I also think it's related to the author trying to accomplish too much. There are several side characters with side plotlines, and while I really enjoyed the secondary characters, it felt more like side roads spiraling off from the main road and not meeting up than a river flowing towards the same goal. This is the first book in series, so I would imagine a lot of these plotlines meet up eventually, but they don't in this story, and it left me a bit perplexed. The main mystery of the dead child is solved, but it only opened a Pandora's Box of other issues that don't really get addressed. 

I ended up liking this book, but I didn't love it. The hard part is what to grade it, since there were some things that were very well done, and other things that were frustrating. Objectively, the writing is fantastic. The characters developed, grew, and changed. I also believe that objectively this book is too long and not cohesive enough. Subjectively, I didn't personally like the main character, but I liked all the other characters. The character's interpersonal relationships were also well done. I really liked the writing. I didn't like the structure of the book. I'm uncertain whether I'm invested enough to continue with the series. 

For SPFBO purposes, I would give it a solid 6.5. Fans of romance, great worldbuilding, fantastic writing, and who don't mind the general tone of the story being dark, will like this one. 

Hall of Bones (The Brotherhood of the Eagle # 1) by Tim Hardie - SPFBO 7 Finalist Book Review
11, Mar

For my first SPFBO 7 finalist review, here is Hall of Bones by Tim Hardie.

*Minor spoilers below!

Burn Red Skies by Kerstin Espinosa Rosero - Book Review
06, Jan

Burn Red Skies follows a host of characters on an adventure that spans a realm teeming with political intrigue and elemental magic. I enjoyed the worldbuilding and in general the characters, but there were a few issues that kept me from complete immersion in the story. Despite these issues, Burn Red Skies is an epic fantasy whose pages are filled with war, secrets, and ultimately dragons—the sort of story which will appeal to many readers.

I love overpowered characters. It’s a preference Booknest’s founder Petros and I both share. And let me tell you, Domaren the Godknight is…just that…overpowered. I know, I know with a super chill name like God knight you would think the guy would be a real pushover…but no. He is a powerhouse. He and his other Godknights use their power, gifted to them by the Creators, to quell rebellions, squash tyrants, and to try to guide foolish mortals while following the Creators’ orders. Unfortunately, pretty early in the narrative, this connection between Godknight and Creator is severed.

So, what does a Godknight do without their God?

This book is jam packed with powerful magics, monsters, colorful characters, and epic battles. Despite the immense power wielded by the main character, there is a weighty feeling of responsibility which feels like a character in and of itself. While I didn’t find myself fearing for Domaren, I was always keenly aware of the mortality of those he protects. His concerns became my concerns, and if that isn’t a wonderful way to relate to Superman, I don’t know what is.

Jeramy Goble does an incredible job making his readers feel the Godknights’ responsibilities and the internal struggle of conscience versus calling. In the end, it doesn’t matter who your boss is, what matters is who you have sworn to protect.

In what I expected to be a book about paladins swinging big ass swords and fighting dragons, Eulogy for the Dawn turned out to be a book about paladins swinging big ass swords and fighting dragons and so much more. Eulogy for the Dawn is a story with as much heart as it has magic, swords, and battles. Fun, intelligent, and heartfelt. I wholeheartedly recommend it.

And that Felix Ortiz/Shawn T. King cover art is spectacular (big shock). It’s my favorite combination going right now. They’re the best.

This is another book I would love to have a physical copy of. I’m not certain I can afford a big old hardcover edition right now, but in the future I’m thinking I’ll grab one. You should do so too! At the very least, grab a digital copy and settle in. Eulogy for the Dawn is fast paced and compelling. My favorite from this competition so far, and my semi-finalist pick.

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